Your words pierce my soul..
I writhe and twist to break free from the bonds,
that tie me down- that stifle and suffocate,
I choke and struggle; my voice,
I have lost. Like a ripple,
I grew and lost myself in the ocean.
Set me free
To find my heaven where I can sing again,
and speak in tongues.
Let me find Eden before the first sin –
My paradise of eternal bliss,
Let me rejoice and be free again..
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Wow. Please write poetry more often.
🙂 Thank you Ron.
“Let me find Eden before the first sin.” Amen!
Thank you very much Deb..:)
Lovely, nice, and yearning. Well written. 🙂
One small thing, though. Without what we call the first sin, man was without awareness and, thus, could hardly be called human. Eden under that very condition surely is not a place to be sought after by conscious human beings. 🙂
Thank you very much Salva for those kind words..I actually didn’t think of it that way and it’s such a valid point..without distinction of right and wrong humans would be reduced to a trance like state..guess I was too focused on the pain of the soul that sought to dissolve into oblivious bliss…Thank you once again
Thanks a lot for your kind reply. I am looking forward for a lot of more such beautiful poetry by you. 🙂
🙂 Thank you.. 🙂
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